|haiku and striking ultraviolence||JS Haiku Shop|
Apr 15, 2003 5:50 AM
because it's five syllables
this weekend, nice days
sunshine, warm temps, gentle winds
hundred sixty miles
before go to bed
check outside thermometer
this, of course, left leg
most of ride back, sun to left
right leg paper white
you see the "tan" lines?
not red, red, not red, large stipe
like barber shop lamp
now, small adjustment
or else "rock lobster"
|re: haiku and striking ultraviolence||terry b|
Apr 15, 2003 5:57 AM
|you should use sunscreen
or else you will die a sad and
lonely death - red
|Hey 'ku -- I've got a poetry contest fo' you....||Gregory Taylor|
Apr 15, 2003 7:21 AM
|Check Out http:\\www.dirtragmag.com -- Dirt Rag is running a "literature" contest. There is a poetry category -- a natural for the recognized purveyor of pedaling poetics.
Easy pickin's for JS
No rhymes, just pure flow...
|No time for the old in-out luv, I'm just here to check the meter||ColnagoFE|
Apr 15, 2003 7:43 AM
|Loved that movie. Ultraviolence indeed.|
|Your wife has nice legs!||triple shot espresso|
Apr 15, 2003 8:25 AM
|Trolling, trolling, trolling, keep them doggies trolling.
No offense, I just saw a shot and took it.
|LOL! nm||JS Haiku Shop|
Apr 15, 2003 8:29 AM
|Ugh! With those shorts, your "tan" line should be||The Walrus|
Apr 15, 2003 3:19 PM
|the least of your worries! ;)|| |