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HELP! I need a good healthy dose of spiritual haiku!(13 posts)

HELP! I need a good healthy dose of spiritual haiku!Spinchick
Sep 17, 2001 1:14 PM
or iambic pentameter, or limerick, etc. You choose! Just hit me with it, quick!!!
...Spiritual Haiku
Sep 17, 2001 1:31 PM
haiku not flowing
saddest thing i've ever seen
still reeling from it

how to teach my son?
inevitable. horror.
the damn animals.

though pride in my strength
jeffreyh cried for five days
now i'm BOILING mad

during desert storm
jeffreyh worried of draft
now: how can i help?

prospect, more bloodshed
there is no win / win answer
still yearn for vengeance
poor attemptDog
Sep 17, 2001 1:34 PM
In times of grief,
My firm belief,
Is to ride 'till your mind is numb.

Everyone is distraught
And tempers and emotions are hot
But ride and swell feelings will come.
ooohhh that's bad Dog (nm)Maya Angelou
Sep 18, 2001 6:32 AM
sdf
........Starliner
Sep 17, 2001 2:21 PM
gently falling tears
contemplating our worst fears
it could have been me.

sounds of confusion
as we face our delusions
now hard to believe.

oh, what do we do
will we really make it through
to the light beyond.

only time will tell
if we have what it will take
for all to be well.
Geez I really am trying.Spinchick
Sep 17, 2001 3:37 PM
My muse is failing me this week.
.....Spinchick
Sep 17, 2001 3:58 PM
Peace, coming again
Red, white, blue seen everywhere
Troubled times will pass

Strong ones rise again
Riding through on bicycles
Flags on aerobars

Chasing turbaned man
With flowing beard and nasty
Ideas in mind

Turbaned man cannot
Run faster than bicycles
Trips on nasty beard

Fallen man with beard
Riders stand around in thought
What to do, what to do?
2nd tryStarliner
Sep 17, 2001 4:19 PM
fantasies crumble
amazing how dreams crumble
when the alarm sounds

indulgent visions
superpower delusions
it's time to wake up

was it truly real
or was it really true
you can never know

one thing for certain
as i move past my slumber
coffee sure smells nice
2nd tryStarliner
Sep 17, 2001 4:21 PM
fantasies tumble
amazing how dreams crumble
when the alarm sounds

indulgent visions
superpower delusions
it's time to wake up

was it truly real
or was it really true
you can never know

one thing for certain
as i move past my slumber
coffee sure smells nice
SleepTimeJoeSlow
Sep 17, 2001 7:00 PM
I feel so tired...
I just wanna sleep...
slip away in to a trance so deep...
Leave my soul just floating free...
No more pain left in me....

Goodnight all
be safe
Comfortably Numb?Dog
Sep 18, 2001 6:06 AM
Reminds me of my favorite Pink Floyd song.

You all are amazing. Great poetry.

Doug
There once was a man from Nantucket....spookyload
Sep 18, 2001 7:45 AM
Just kidding. I am such a child sometimes.
such a childDog
Sep 18, 2001 8:24 AM
We all are. We ride around on toys all day long.

Doug